Ok here we got the dialouges:
What do you think?
Are they ok?
I think slowly I´m understanding the branded one´s mind

In Joringsbridge:
Sergeant: Have you heard about it? It is said that there are some strange things going on these days..
Some people are missing.
Choice:
[I don´t care]
[tell me more]
if [tell me more]
You: Hm.. Sounds interesting. Tell me more.
Sergeant: Sorry, but that´s all I know. Maybe it´s just some rumor, but I have the feeling that it is really happening.
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit when i get bored of cleaning the surrounding area from bandits..
if [I don´t care]
You: Hmpf, as I´d care about that! Learn to handle the problems in your city yourself.
after [I don´t care]
Choice:
[changed mind]
[never mind]
if [changed mind]
You: Hm, I´ve changed my mind. I´m bored of this place. I need an adventure.. Tell me what you know!
Sergeant: Have you heard about it? It is said that there are some strange things going on these days..
Some people are missing.
Sergeant: Sorry, but that´s all I know. Maybe it´s just some rumor, but I have the feeling that it is really happening.
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit..
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When finding the campfire:
You: Hmmm, a bunch of bandits sitting round a campfire? Let´s see if we can eavesdrop and get some information!
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After eavesdropping and killing the bandits:
You: A prison? I should look around for it! I´m sure I´ll find it with my pathfinding skills.
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After killing Rob:
You: Oh, what do we have here? A key? I shall be cursed if I don´t find the door it´s for!
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When finding the prison:
Bandit guards: Invaders! Come and help us!
You: Oh my.. Time to fight.
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After killing the guards:
[if you don´t have key]
You: Oh no.. the key is missing! Now I have to search it...
[if you have key]
After setting the prisoners free:
Prisoner Jonas: Thank you for rescuing us! But the group of prisoners got split up by the bandits!
So there must be a second prison, but unfortunately I don´t know where.. They were making us work on a cart to transport stolen stuff.
You: I´ll watch out for it. Now get home!
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Back in Joringsbridge:
Sergeant: I heard you have rescued that people. So the rumor was true.. Well as a reward take this helmet
from a thankful prisoner and some gold. I really appreciate your help!
You: Ah, I can always use some gold and some new piece of armor.