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Feedback & Feature Requests / Re: "skip dialouge"-button?
« on: December 20, 2011, 05:40:52 PM »
Yeah, definitely :p
For one like you it should be able to be done in just some minutes ;)

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Feedback & Feature Requests / Re: "skip dialouge"-button?
« on: December 18, 2011, 04:39:42 PM »
dezGusty: exactly.
protogenes: thanks.

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Feedback & Feature Requests / "skip dialouge"-button?
« on: December 16, 2011, 03:29:49 PM »
Hello.

I just got an cool idea:
We all know this: Playing through a game the second time and already knowing what to do and when and where.. But we gotta click away all these dialouges.
That sucks.
So why not add an button to skip the dialouge?

What do you think?

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Story / Re: Rizar the demon eater
« on: December 13, 2011, 08:29:06 PM »
Here´s the dialouge:





Stopping the two demons:

You: Stop!
Demon: Go out of the way!
You: Why are you runnning away?
Demon: Hm.. Ok I tell you, but then you gotta let us go our way or we´ll fight you!

Choice:
[attack]
[let explain]

____________________

if [attack]:

After killing:

You: I wonder why they ran away. I should have a look into that cave.

____________________

if [let explain]:

Demon: My friend and I went into this cave. There is an old demon legend, I never believed it, but now I do. Once there was a demon so huge he had to live in a cave away from the other demons. He never stopped growing and so one day he couldn´t come out of the cave anymore. But unfortunately the cave collapsed. He has blood all over his body, being jammed between the stones. He is angry and to survive he eats every demon that goes to far into the cave.
You: So you saw this monster?
Demon: Yes. If you don´t believe us look into the cave. But now let us go or fight!
You: Ok, but if there is no monster in that cave I´ll haunt you and kill you!
Demon: Whatever..


____________________________

Finding Rizar:

Rizar: RAHHHHH!
You: Let´s see if we can tame that beast..


____________________________

After killing Rizar:

Rizar: Thank you. I´ve been jammed here for hundreds of years. Finally I may leave this place.
Burning in Harad´s Hell is better than being jammed between those stones for another eternity.
You: No problem. I´ll reward myself with your treasures if you don´t mind..

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Story / Re: The major´s ring
« on: December 10, 2011, 11:23:21 PM »
Ok, worked out some dialouge for it.
Do you like it?






Talking to the major:

Major: Hello. I appreciate your help.
You: If you stop making a mud face, I´ll believe that you mean it.
Major: Sorry. It´s just some I´ve lost my ring. My wedding ring.

Choice:
[shut up]
[tell me more]

if [shut up]

You: I don´t care, my job is done.

if [tell me more]

You: Tell me what happened.
Major: {1} Well before the attack started I was taking a walk outside. Suddenly the demons came and I ran away. I lost my ring while I was running. It must still be there. It was north from the town.
You: Don´t worry, I´ll find it for you.

After [shut up]

Choice:
[never mind]
[changed mind]

if [changed mind]

You: I´ve changed my mind. Tell me what happened.
Major: see {1}


_________________________________________

Finding the ring:

Mercenary: Look, Altras, this ring is made of pure gold. And it´s real art.
You: Hey, give me that ring! It´s the major´s wedding ring.
Mercenary: No, I´ll sell it. But I know the major doesn´t have much gold.. Do you wanna buy it? It´s only 2000 gold for you.

Choice:
[buy]
[fight]

if [buy]

You: Ok, here you have your gold. Now give me that damn ring!
Mercenary: I´m not a scammer. Here you have.

if [fight]

You: Hah, never! I´ll defeat you two.


__________________________________________

Bringing the major the ring:

You: Here you have your ring.
Major: Thanks. I don´t have much money, but as a reward take some gold.

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Story / Re: Goblin raid [add-on]
« on: December 10, 2011, 09:30:14 PM »
Ok, what do you think of this dialouge?



If we find the side camp first:


Finding the side camp:

You: Hm.. This looks like a goblin camp. But why are there 2 goblins running away? Anyway, let´s clear it!


_________________________________________

After clearing the side camp:

You: There must be more. The battle plans.. And the 2 goblins. I think they are messengers or something like that. I´ll have to look around.


_________________________________________

Finding the main camp:

You: Ah, there we got our messengers. Another camp to clear.. I hope, this is the last one.


_________________________________________

After clearing the main camp:

You: {1} Let´s reward ourselves.. I see some chests round here. Let´s have a look what´s inside of them.


_________________________________________

After taking all the stuff:

You: Oh no, goblin daddy has arrived. And he looks angry. Well, then this shall be the last fight in this goblin camp business.






If we find the main camp first:


Finding the main camp:

You: Hm.. This looks like a goblin camp. Let´s clear it!

_________________________________________

After clearing the main camp:

You: see {1}


_________________________________________

After taking all the stuff:

You: Oh no, a angry goblin! I´m shivering!


_________________________________________

After seeing the messengers running away:

You: Hm. There must be more, I guess those 2 goblins are messengers. Let´s look around.


_________________________________________

Finding the side camp and seeing the two messengers arrive:

You: There we got our messengers. Let´s clear this place.


_________________________________________

After clearing the side camp:

[monolouge about battleplans]

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Story / Re: The prison (Part 2)
« on: December 10, 2011, 08:03:39 PM »
Sorry, have been really lazy in the last time..
I´ll make some dialouges this evening :)
Here´s my first one for today:

What do you think? Is it fitting?




Finding the second prison in the Westwoods:

You: Hm, I think I´m seeing a prison..
Guards: Invader! Guards, attack!


_____________________________________________________

After killing the guards:

You: Oh no, the key is missing again..
Prisoner: Hey, thanks for the help. There is a huge guard not far from here. His name is Breham. He has the key. But beware, he's Rob the Robber´s brother and as ruthless as his brother.


_____________________________________________________

Finding Breham:

Breham: You are gonna die!
You: Well, one of us is definitely gonna die, but it won´t be me!


_____________________________________________________

After setting the prisoners free:

Prisoner: Thanks! How can I thank you for rescuing my life? Oh wait, my grandfather once was a mighty mage before he died. I inherited his hat, but I cannot cast a single spell. May it serve you from now on!
You: That was nothing. Now get home!

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Story / Re: Tecra´s bow
« on: December 08, 2011, 06:07:13 PM »
Ok, but how shall I do that then?
Shall I give ´em numbers if I use an answer more often than one time?
I mean like:

A: (93) Hi. I am Mr. A.
B: Please repeat that!
A: {see 93}

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Story / Re: The prison (Part 1)
« on: December 08, 2011, 06:02:40 PM »
Is this one better?




In Joringsbridge:

Sergeant: There are some strange things going on these days.. Some people are missing.

Choice:
[I don´t care]
[tell me more]

if [tell me more]

You: Hm.. Sounds interesting. Tell me more.
Sergeant: Sorry, but that´s all I know. I´m too busy to look out for it.
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit when I get bored of cleaning the surrounding area from bandits..

if [I don´t care]

You: Hmpf, as I´d care about that! Learn to handle the problems in your city yourself.

after [I don´t care]

Choice:
[changed mind]
[never mind]

if [changed mind]

You: Hm, I´ve changed my mind. I´m bored of this place. I need an adventure.. Tell me what you know!
Sergeant: There are some strange things going on these days.. Some people are missing.
But that´s all I know. I´m just too busy to look out for it..
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit..


_____________________________________________

When finding the campfire:

You: Hmmm, a bunch of bandits sitting round a campfire? Let´s see if we can eavesdrop and get some information!


_____________________________________________

Bandits at the campfire:

Dob: Guys, we just got some new slaves. We took prisoners after the last raid.
Den: Great. Where are they?
Dob: We´ve hidden them in the forest. They´re building war machines for us now.
Den: Hm, I´ve got the feeling that there is someone spying on us.
Dob: Hm, let´s leave this place..
Den: Look out! There behind the tree, a spy!


_____________________________________________

After eavesdropping and killing the bandits:

You: A prison? I should look around for it! I´m sure I´ll find it with my pathfinding skills.


_____________________________________________

After killing Rob:

You: Oh, what do we have here? A key? I shall be cursed if I don´t find the door it´s for!


_____________________________________________


When finding the prison:

Bandit guards: Invaders! Come and help us!
You: Oh my.. Time to fight.


_____________________________________________

After killing the guards:

[if you don´t have key]

You: Oh no.. the key is missing! Now I have to search it...

[if you have key]

After setting the prisoners free:

Prisoner Jonas: Thank you for rescuing us! But the group of prisoners got split up by the bandits!
So there must be a second prison, but unfortunately I don´t know where.. They were making us work
on a cart to transport stolen stuff.
You: I´ll watch out for it. Now get home!


_____________________________________________

Back in Joringsbridge:

Sergeant: I heard you have rescued that people. So the rumor was true.. Well as a reward take this helmet
from a thankful prisoner and some gold. I really appreciate your help!
You: Ah, I can always use some gold and some new piece of armor.

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Story / Re: The prison (Part 1)
« on: December 06, 2011, 08:16:12 PM »
Ok here we got the dialouges:
What do you think?
Are they ok?
I think slowly I´m understanding the branded one´s mind :)



In Joringsbridge:

Sergeant: Have you heard about it? It is said that there are some strange things going on these days..
Some people are missing.

Choice:
[I don´t care]
[tell me more]

if [tell me more]

You: Hm.. Sounds interesting. Tell me more.
Sergeant: Sorry, but that´s all I know. Maybe it´s just some rumor, but I have the feeling that it is really happening.
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit when i get bored of cleaning the surrounding area from bandits..

if [I don´t care]

You: Hmpf, as I´d care about that! Learn to handle the problems in your city yourself.

after [I don´t care]

Choice:
[changed mind]
[never mind]

if [changed mind]

You: Hm, I´ve changed my mind. I´m bored of this place. I need an adventure.. Tell me what you know!
Sergeant: Have you heard about it? It is said that there are some strange things going on these days..
Some people are missing.
Sergeant: Sorry, but that´s all I know. Maybe it´s just some rumor, but I have the feeling that it is really happening.
You: Hmmm, maybe I´ll look around a bit..


_____________________________________________

When finding the campfire:

You: Hmmm, a bunch of bandits sitting round a campfire? Let´s see if we can eavesdrop and get some information!


_____________________________________________

After eavesdropping and killing the bandits:

You: A prison? I should look around for it! I´m sure I´ll find it with my pathfinding skills.


_____________________________________________

After killing Rob:

You: Oh, what do we have here? A key? I shall be cursed if I don´t find the door it´s for!


_____________________________________________


When finding the prison:

Bandit guards: Invaders! Come and help us!
You: Oh my.. Time to fight.


_____________________________________________

After killing the guards:

[if you don´t have key]

You: Oh no.. the key is missing! Now I have to search it...

[if you have key]

After setting the prisoners free:

Prisoner Jonas: Thank you for rescuing us! But the group of prisoners got split up by the bandits!
So there must be a second prison, but unfortunately I don´t know where.. They were making us work on a cart to transport stolen stuff.
You: I´ll watch out for it. Now get home!


_____________________________________________

Back in Joringsbridge:

Sergeant: I heard you have rescued that people. So the rumor was true.. Well as a reward take this helmet
from a thankful prisoner and some gold. I really appreciate your help!
You: Ah, I can always use some gold and some new piece of armor.

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Story / Re: Tecra´s bow
« on: December 05, 2011, 07:48:12 PM »
Ok, worked out a little dialouge for this quest.
What do you think?


After finishing the spider quest:

Guy: Do you know that old legend about Tecra?

Choice:
[tell it]
[shut up]

if [tell it]

Guy: Hundreds of years ago Tecra was the best archer on earth. He was a good human and so he decided to fight against the necromancers to punish them for what they did to the humans. But he wouldn´t fight alone, of course he had a troop of loyal helpers with him. But Vecronce, the god of desease didn´t like that. He created a desease called flesh fever and spreaded it over the necromancer´s land. This desease makes a fighter slowly get killed by his own weapons. After a while it reached the fronts and Tecra and all his soldiers got ill by it. Soon they died and the war ended. Their souls are owned by Vecronce now, but their possesed bodies still walk on earth. It is said that Tecra and a few soldiers are hiding deep in these caverns, guarding their holy weapons, which they aren´t capable to use anymore due to their desease.
You: Funny little story there.. Well if I get bored in this cave maybe I´ll look around a bit.

if [shut up]

You: Shut up! I already lost enough time by helping you! Gotta leave now.

After [shut up]

Choice:
[changed mind]
[never mind]

if [changed mind]

You: I´ve changed my mind. Tell me that legend!
Guy: Hundreds of years ago Tecra was the best archer on earth. He was a good human and so he decided to fight against the necromancers to punish them for what they did to the humans. But he wouldn´t fight alone, of course he had a troop of loyal helpers with him. But Vecronce, the god of desease didn´t like that. He created a desease called flesh fever and spreaded it over the necromancer´s land. This desease makes a fighter slowly get killed by his own weapons. After a while it reached the fronts and Tecra and all his soldiers got ill by it. Soon they died and the war ended. Their souls are owned by Vecronce now, but their possesed bodies still walk on earth. It is said that Tecra and a few soldiers are hiding deep in these caverns, guarding their holy weapons, which they aren´t capable to use anymore due to their desease.
You: Funny little story there.. Well if I get bored in this cave maybe I´ll look around a bit.

____________________________________________________________________________

At the sacrophagi:

Group of undeads: Get away from our weapons!
You: Thanks for the nice welcome! Time to return the favour!

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Story / Re: The two brothers
« on: December 05, 2011, 05:17:52 PM »
Is this one better?
Integrated your proposals.



In Dwarfenfall:


Eric: Hey. A new face is rare here, but always welcome! Especially in times like these.
You: Thanks. And if you smile maybe I'll also believe it.
Eric: I'm sorry. The thing is: I have a brother, his name is Simon. I have an important message for him, but he lives in the Black Pits.
And it is too dangerous for a civil man to go there. That's demon land.

Choice:
[help]
[don´t help]

if [help]:

You: Maybe I could help you for a little reward..
Eric: That´d be great! Here, take this letter. Give it to Simon and he´ll give you a reward.
He´s the weapon trader of the Black Pits, you will see him when you enter.
You: Sure. I'll give it to him if I come to the Black Pits...

if [don´t help]

You: Do I look like a messenger to you?
Eric: I'm sorry. You looked capable, but I shouldn't have assumed... Come back if you change your mind.

after [don´t help]

Choice:
[help2]
[don´t help2]

if [help2]

You: Ok, I´ve changed my mind. Give me the damn letter.
Eric: That´d be great! Here, take this letter. Give it to Simon and he´ll give you a reward.
He´s the weapon trader of the Black Pits, you will see him when you enter.
You: I just hope this is worth my trouble.

if [don´t help2]

Eric: Have you changed your mind?
You: No. I'm not a gopher.

after [help] or [help2]

Eric: Thanks, I appreciate your help!

                                                                 

In the Black Pits:

Simon: Hrmm. Hello. What do you want?

Choice:
[message]
[shop]

if [message]

You: I have a letter for you. It´s from your brother Eric in Dwarfenfall.
Simon: Really? Wouldn´t have thought he´d contact me ever again..
You: Here you go. Eric promised you´d give me a reward..
Simon: Swore never to speak a single word with me ever again and now he goes and gives away my merchandise... whatever. If I have to... You can have one weapon of your choice for free. But nothing more!

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Graphics / Re: Experimental - shader based shadows
« on: December 05, 2011, 05:10:43 PM »
Looks nice already.
Seems like there´ll maybe be a christmas present. ;)

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Story / Re: The two brothers
« on: December 04, 2011, 03:25:32 PM »
Ok, so i worked out a dialouge for this.
Tell me what you think.
And kalimgard: Is the structure ok?
And are the dialouges fitting?



Proposals from Kalimgard in blue
In Dwarfenfall:


Eric: Hey. A new face is rare here, but always welcome! Especially in times like these.
You: Thanks. You look kinda depressed. What is it?
Instead: Thanks. And if you smile maybe I'll believe it, too.
Eric: I'm sorry. The thing is: I have a brother, his name is Simon. I have an important message for him, but he lives in the Black Pits.
And it is too dangerous for a civil man to go there. That's demon land.

Choice:
[help]
[don´t help]

if [help]:

You: Maybe I could help you for a little reward..
Eric: That´d be great! Here, take this letter. Give it to Simon and he´ll give you a reward.
He´s the weapon trader of the Black Pits, you will see him when you enter.
You: I´m on my way, sir.
Instead: Sure. I'll give it to him if I come to the Black Pits...

if [don´t help]

You: Sorry, I don´t have the time to help you.
Instead: Do I look like a messenger to you?
Eric: Ok, come back if you change your mind.
Instead: I'm sorry. You looked capable, but I shouldn't have assumed... Come back if you change your mind.

after [don´t help]

Choice:
[help2]
[don´t help2]

if [help2]

You: Ok, I´ve changed my mind. I guess I can help you.
Instead: Ok, I´ve changed my mind. Give me the damn letter.
Eric: That´d be great! Here, take this letter. Give it to Simon and he´ll give you a reward.
He´s the weapon trader of the Black Pits, you will see him when you enter.
You: I´m on my way, sir.
Instead: I just hope this is worth my trouble.

if [don´t help2]

Eric: Have you changed your mind?
You: No. Never mind.
Instead: No way. I'm not a gopher.

after [help] or [help2]

Eric: Thanks, I appreciate your help!

                                                                 

In the Black Pits:

Simon: Hrmm. Hello. What do you want?

Choice:
[message]
[shop]

if [message]

You: I have a letter for you. It´s from your brother Eric in Dwarfenfall.
Simon: Really? Wouldn´t have thought he´d contact me ever again..
You: Here you go. Eric said/promised you´d give me a reward..
Simon: Did he now? Swore never to speak a single word with me ever again and now he goes and gives away my merchandise... whatever. If I have to. You can have one weapon of your choice for free. But nothing more!

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General / Re: Help Wanted!
« on: December 03, 2011, 08:21:06 PM »
Quote
Everyone in the forum may become a Wiki Editor, just PM me or write a comment below. Maybe i should make wiki writeable for everyone registered here? Feedback wanted.

No, please not.
That´s too risky IMO.
Who wants to work on it and who has the requirements to do so will ask anyway I guess.

Quote
Moderators, please let us know in which board you feel comfortable and how much time you want to invest each week.

Does that mean you seek forum moderators or do I misunderstand you?

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